analyze the stories I think we should distinguish the four elements that make up a story said. Nuclei, sequences, information and evidence. If there is a good nucleus there is no story.
[...] I will get with my own story.
The core might be something silly: a strange place with strange events. As these events are more sobados that it mu pasiegos sobaos wrong.
Information overload, too careful in giving details that do not assert the core because they are just units themselves without being sticks that are compatible with the core narrative.
The signs do not fit the rest and do not help advance the story, rather, are disappearing and that data are not "used" later to round out the text. Abuse
informants: the sin of the Nerds! What we mean everything, that we are not miss anything and the result is already seen. A story very ornate and some condensate, a slender tree trunk and many branches.
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